{
  "id": "callout-numbered-screen",
  "schemaVersion": 2,
  "title": {
    "ja": "申請画面の指摘 — 4 か所を直せば差し戻しが減る",
    "en": "Four Marks on One Screen — What to Fix Before the Rework Piles Up"
  },
  "summary": {
    "ja": "画面に番号を打ち、引き出し線で指摘を結ぶ。画面は画像ではなく div で描くので、公開されても図が欠けない",
    "en": "Numbered pins on a screen, each tied to its finding by a leader line. The screen is drawn in markup rather than pasted as an image, so nothing goes missing when it is published"
  },
  "capturedAt": "2026-09-16",
  "categories": [
    "presentation",
    "ui-component"
  ],
  "tags": [
    "minimal",
    "typography"
  ],
  "useCases": [
    "requirements"
  ],
  "format": "slide-16x9",
  "density": "medium",
  "layout": {
    "kind": "annotated",
    "canvas": {
      "w": 1920,
      "h": 1080
    },
    "margin": {
      "top": 96,
      "right": 140,
      "bottom": 96,
      "left": 140
    }
  },
  "type": {
    "title": {
      "size": 44,
      "weight": 700,
      "tracking": "0.01em",
      "leading": 1.3
    },
    "window": {
      "size": 20,
      "weight": 500,
      "leading": 1.5
    },
    "pinNum": {
      "size": 24,
      "weight": 700,
      "leading": 1
    },
    "noteIndex": {
      "size": 24,
      "weight": 700,
      "leading": 1.3
    },
    "noteName": {
      "size": 24,
      "weight": 700,
      "leading": 1.3
    },
    "noteDetail": {
      "size": 20,
      "weight": 400,
      "leading": 1.6
    },
    "note": {
      "size": 16,
      "weight": 400,
      "leading": 1.6
    }
  },
  "colors": {
    "ground": "#FFFFFF",
    "surface": "#F4F6F9",
    "ink": "#131820",
    "muted": "#667183",
    "accent": "#1F5FA8",
    "rule": "#DBE1E9",
    "series": []
  },
  "rules": [
    {
      "ja": "画面を画像で貼らない。公開されるのは版と font.css と woff2 だけなので、隣に置いた画像は手元でだけ出て、公開版では静かに欠ける",
      "en": "Never paste the screen as an image. Only the artboard, its font.css and its woff2 files are published, so an image beside them renders locally and silently 404s in public"
    },
    {
      "ja": "画面は線画にする。実物の文字を写すと、読み手は指摘ではなく文面を読み始める",
      "en": "Draw the screen as a wireframe. Reproduce its real text and the reader starts reading the copy instead of the findings"
    },
    {
      "ja": "番号の順序は直す順序にする。画面上の位置で番号を振ると、順序に意味があるように見えて、優先順として読まれてしまう",
      "en": "Number by the order of repair. Numbering by position on screen looks like a priority order and will be read as one"
    },
    {
      "ja": "引き出し線は番号より先に描く。あとから置いた丸が線の端を隠し、線がどこを指しているかが明確になる",
      "en": "Draw the leader lines before the pins. The pin then covers the line's end, so what the line points at is unambiguous"
    },
    {
      "ja": "指摘は 5 つまで。6 つ目からは線が交差し、どの番号がどこを指しているかを目で追えなくなる",
      "en": "Five findings at most. From the sixth the leader lines cross and the eye can no longer follow which pin belongs to which note"
    }
  ],
  "cover": "https://design-vault.pages.dev/_astro/cover.HB8NFtKp.png",
  "assets": [],
  "shortlist": false,
  "status": "published",
  "relations": {
    "similar": [
      "maturity-staircase-now-target"
    ]
  },
  "license": "Original",
  "publishedAt": null,
  "reproduction": {
    "spec": {
      "format": "slide-16x9",
      "density": "medium",
      "layout": {
        "kind": "annotated",
        "canvas": {
          "w": 1920,
          "h": 1080
        },
        "margin": {
          "top": 96,
          "right": 140,
          "bottom": 96,
          "left": 140
        }
      },
      "type": {
        "title": {
          "size": 44,
          "weight": 700,
          "tracking": "0.01em",
          "leading": 1.3
        },
        "window": {
          "size": 20,
          "weight": 500,
          "leading": 1.5
        },
        "pinNum": {
          "size": 24,
          "weight": 700,
          "leading": 1
        },
        "noteIndex": {
          "size": 24,
          "weight": 700,
          "leading": 1.3
        },
        "noteName": {
          "size": 24,
          "weight": 700,
          "leading": 1.3
        },
        "noteDetail": {
          "size": 20,
          "weight": 400,
          "leading": 1.6
        },
        "note": {
          "size": 16,
          "weight": 400,
          "leading": 1.6
        }
      },
      "colors": {
        "ground": "#FFFFFF",
        "surface": "#F4F6F9",
        "ink": "#131820",
        "muted": "#667183",
        "accent": "#1F5FA8",
        "rule": "#DBE1E9"
      },
      "rules": [
        "Never paste the screen as an image. Only the artboard, its font.css and its woff2 files are published, so an image beside them renders locally and silently 404s in public",
        "Draw the screen as a wireframe. Reproduce its real text and the reader starts reading the copy instead of the findings",
        "Number by the order of repair. Numbering by position on screen looks like a priority order and will be read as one",
        "Draw the leader lines before the pins. The pin then covers the line's end, so what the line points at is unambiguous",
        "Five findings at most. From the sixth the leader lines cross and the eye can no longer follow which pin belongs to which note"
      ]
    },
    "prompt": {
      "ja": "以下の仕様でスライドを 1 枚作ってください。\n\n- 版面 1920 × 1080\n- 余白 上 96 右 140 下 96 左 140\n\n## 文字（版面 1920px に対する px）\ntitle  44px / 700 / 字間 0.01em / 行送り 1.3\nwindow  20px / 500 / 行送り 1.5\npinNum  24px / 700 / 行送り 1\nnoteIndex  24px / 700 / 行送り 1.3\nnoteName  24px / 700 / 行送り 1.3\nnoteDetail  20px / 400 / 行送り 1.6\nnote  16px / 400 / 行送り 1.6\n\n## 配色\n地 #FFFFFF / 面 #F4F6F9 / 文字 #131820 / 補助 #667183 / 強調 #1F5FA8 / 罫 #DBE1E9\n\n## 外すと崩れる点\n- 画面を画像で貼らない。公開されるのは版と font.css と woff2 だけなので、隣に置いた画像は手元でだけ出て、公開版では静かに欠ける\n- 画面は線画にする。実物の文字を写すと、読み手は指摘ではなく文面を読み始める\n- 番号の順序は直す順序にする。画面上の位置で番号を振ると、順序に意味があるように見えて、優先順として読まれてしまう\n- 引き出し線は番号より先に描く。あとから置いた丸が線の端を隠し、線がどこを指しているかが明確になる\n- 指摘は 5 つまで。6 つ目からは線が交差し、どの番号がどこを指しているかを目で追えなくなる\n\n内容は［ここに自分の内容を書く］に置き換えてください。寸法と配色はそのまま守ってください。\n正確に再現する場合は、この HTML をそのまま使ってください: https://design-vault.pages.dev/designs/callout-numbered-screen/pattern.html",
      "en": "Produce one slide to the following specification.\n\n- Canvas 1920 × 1080\n- Margin top 96 right 140 bottom 96 left 140\n\n## Type (px against a 1920px canvas)\ntitle  44px / 700 / tracking 0.01em / leading 1.3\nwindow  20px / 500 / leading 1.5\npinNum  24px / 700 / leading 1\nnoteIndex  24px / 700 / leading 1.3\nnoteName  24px / 700 / leading 1.3\nnoteDetail  20px / 400 / leading 1.6\nnote  16px / 400 / leading 1.6\n\n## Colour\nGround #FFFFFF / Surface #F4F6F9 / Ink #131820 / Muted #667183 / Accent #1F5FA8 / Rule #DBE1E9\n\n## Constraints — dropping these breaks it\n- Never paste the screen as an image. Only the artboard, its font.css and its woff2 files are published, so an image beside them renders locally and silently 404s in public\n- Draw the screen as a wireframe. Reproduce its real text and the reader starts reading the copy instead of the findings\n- Number by the order of repair. Numbering by position on screen looks like a priority order and will be read as one\n- Draw the leader lines before the pins. The pin then covers the line's end, so what the line points at is unambiguous\n- Five findings at most. From the sixth the leader lines cross and the eye can no longer follow which pin belongs to which note\n\nReplace the content with [your content]. Keep the measurements and colours as given.\nFor an exact reproduction, use the verbatim HTML at https://design-vault.pages.dev/designs/callout-numbered-screen/pattern.html."
    },
    "code": {
      "html": "<!doctype html>\n<meta charset=\"utf-8\">\n<title>申請画面の指摘 — 4 か所を直せば差し戻しが減る</title>\n<meta name=\"dv-font\" content=\"Zen Kaku Gothic New:400;500;700\">\n<link rel=\"stylesheet\" href=\"./font.css\">\n<style>\n  /* 色のリテラルはこの :root にだけ置く。以下の規則は var() か color-mix() で名指す。\n     区分色は持たない —— 番号が指す場所が意味であって、色は何も言っていない。 */\n  :root {\n    --ground: #FFFFFF;\n    --surface: #F4F6F9;\n    --ink: #131820;\n    --muted: #667183;\n    --accent: #1F5FA8;\n    --rule: #DBE1E9;\n  }\n\n  * { box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0; }\n  html, body { width: 1920px; height: 1080px; }\n  body { font-family: \"Zen Kaku Gothic New\", \"IPAGothic\", sans-serif; }\n\n  .artboard {\n    width: 1920px;\n    height: 1080px;\n    background: var(--ground);\n    color: var(--ink);\n    padding: 96px 140px;\n  }\n\n  .content {\n    height: 100%;\n    display: grid;\n    grid-template-rows: auto minmax(0, 1fr) auto;\n  }\n\n  .head { border-bottom: 2px solid var(--rule); padding-bottom: 28px; }\n  .title { font-size: 44px; font-weight: 700; letter-spacing: 0.01em; line-height: 1.3; }\n  .window { margin-top: 14px; font-size: 20px; font-weight: 500; line-height: 1.5; color: var(--muted); }\n\n  .body { display: grid; align-content: center; }\n\n  /* 画面は画像ではなく div で描く。公開されるのは版と font.css と woff2 だけなので、\n     版の隣に画像を置くと、手元では出て公開版だけが静かに 404 になる。 */\n  .stage { position: relative; width: 1640px; height: 620px; }\n\n  .screen { position: absolute; left: 0; top: 0; width: 980px; height: 620px; border: 2px solid var(--rule); border-radius: 14px; background: var(--ground); overflow: hidden; }\n  .titlebar { position: absolute; left: 0; top: 0; width: 980px; height: 56px; background: var(--surface); border-bottom: 1px solid var(--rule); }\n  .dot { position: absolute; top: 21px; width: 14px; height: 14px; border-radius: 50%; background: var(--rule); }\n  .sidebar { position: absolute; left: 0; top: 57px; width: 220px; height: 563px; background: var(--surface); border-right: 1px solid var(--rule); }\n  .sidebar-item { position: absolute; left: 28px; width: 150px; height: 14px; border-radius: 7px; background: var(--rule); }\n  .label-bar { position: absolute; width: 170px; height: 14px; border-radius: 7px; background: var(--rule); }\n  .field { position: absolute; width: 560px; height: 52px; border: 1px solid var(--rule); border-radius: 8px; background: var(--surface); }\n  .submit { position: absolute; left: 700px; top: 510px; width: 200px; height: 56px; border-radius: 8px; background: var(--accent); }\n\n  /* 引き出し線は SVG で、番号より先に描く。あとから置いた番号の丸が線の端を隠す。 */\n  .leaders { position: absolute; left: 0; top: 0; }\n  .leader { fill: none; stroke: var(--muted); stroke-width: 1.6; }\n\n  .pin { position: absolute; width: 46px; height: 46px; margin: -23px 0 0 -23px; border-radius: 50%; border: 3px solid var(--accent); background: var(--ground); display: grid; place-content: center; }\n  /* 地の色を強調の上に抜かない。抜くと `emphasis.via: [\"fill\"]` の宣言が要る。 */\n  .pin-num { font-size: 24px; font-weight: 700; line-height: 1; color: var(--accent); }\n\n  .notes { position: absolute; right: 0; top: 10px; width: 560px; }\n  .note-row { height: 140px; }\n  .note-head { display: flex; align-items: baseline; gap: 14px; }\n  .note-index { font-size: 24px; font-weight: 700; line-height: 1.3; color: var(--accent); }\n  .note-name { font-size: 24px; font-weight: 700; line-height: 1.3; }\n  .note-detail { margin-top: 10px; font-size: 20px; font-weight: 400; line-height: 1.6; color: var(--muted); }\n\n  .foot { border-top: 1px solid var(--rule); padding-top: 22px; font-size: 16px; font-weight: 400; line-height: 1.6; color: var(--muted); }\n</style>\n\n<div class=\"artboard\" data-artboard>\n  <div class=\"content\" data-content>\n    <div class=\"head\">\n      <h1 class=\"title\" data-type=\"title\">申請画面の指摘 — 4 か所を直せば差し戻しが減る</h1>\n      <p class=\"window\" data-type=\"window\">対象は経費申請の入力画面 / 指摘は 9 月の受入検査 / 番号は修正の優先順</p>\n    </div>\n\n    <div class=\"body\">\n      <div class=\"stage\">\n        <div class=\"screen\">\n          <div class=\"titlebar\"></div>\n          <span class=\"dot\" style=\"left: 24px\"></span>\n          <span class=\"dot\" style=\"left: 48px\"></span>\n          <span class=\"dot\" style=\"left: 72px\"></span>\n\n          <div class=\"sidebar\"></div>\n          <span class=\"sidebar-item\" style=\"top: 100px\"></span>\n          <span class=\"sidebar-item\" style=\"top: 152px\"></span>\n          <span class=\"sidebar-item\" style=\"top: 204px\"></span>\n          <span class=\"sidebar-item\" style=\"top: 256px\"></span>\n\n          <span class=\"label-bar\" style=\"left: 260px; top: 110px\"></span>\n          <span class=\"field\" style=\"left: 260px; top: 136px\"></span>\n          <span class=\"label-bar\" style=\"left: 260px; top: 210px\"></span>\n          <span class=\"field\" style=\"left: 260px; top: 236px\"></span>\n          <span class=\"label-bar\" style=\"left: 260px; top: 310px\"></span>\n          <span class=\"field\" style=\"left: 260px; top: 336px\"></span>\n          <span class=\"label-bar\" style=\"left: 260px; top: 410px\"></span>\n          <span class=\"field\" style=\"left: 260px; top: 436px\"></span>\n\n          <span class=\"submit\"></span>\n        </div>\n\n        <!-- 等倍で描く。viewBox と width/height を一致させてあるので、拡大率が\n             入らず、線が指す座標は版面の px とそのまま同じになる。 -->\n        <svg class=\"leaders\" width=\"1640\" height=\"620\" viewBox=\"0 0 1640 620\">\n          <path class=\"leader\" d=\"M300 162 L1060 80\"/>\n          <path class=\"leader\" d=\"M700 262 L1060 220\"/>\n          <path class=\"leader\" d=\"M300 462 L1060 360\"/>\n          <path class=\"leader\" d=\"M800 538 L1060 500\"/>\n        </svg>\n\n        <span class=\"pin\" style=\"left: 300px; top: 162px\"><span class=\"pin-num\" data-type=\"pinNum\">1</span></span>\n        <span class=\"pin\" style=\"left: 700px; top: 262px\"><span class=\"pin-num\">2</span></span>\n        <span class=\"pin\" style=\"left: 300px; top: 462px\"><span class=\"pin-num\">3</span></span>\n        <span class=\"pin\" style=\"left: 800px; top: 538px\"><span class=\"pin-num\">4</span></span>\n\n        <div class=\"notes\">\n          <div class=\"note-row\">\n            <div class=\"note-head\">\n              <span class=\"note-index\" data-type=\"noteIndex\">1</span>\n              <span class=\"note-name\" data-type=\"noteName\">勘定科目が先頭にある</span>\n            </div>\n            <div class=\"note-detail\" data-type=\"noteDetail\">使う人は金額から入力する。順序を入れ替える</div>\n          </div>\n          <div class=\"note-row\">\n            <div class=\"note-head\">\n              <span class=\"note-index\">2</span>\n              <span class=\"note-name\">添付が任意に見える</span>\n            </div>\n            <div class=\"note-detail\">必須の項目に必須と書く。星印だけでは伝わらない</div>\n          </div>\n          <div class=\"note-row\">\n            <div class=\"note-head\">\n              <span class=\"note-index\">3</span>\n              <span class=\"note-name\">下書きが消える</span>\n            </div>\n            <div class=\"note-detail\">離れたときに保存し、戻ってきた人に続きを残す</div>\n          </div>\n          <div class=\"note-row\">\n            <div class=\"note-head\">\n              <span class=\"note-index\">4</span>\n              <span class=\"note-name\">送信後の行き先が無い</span>\n            </div>\n            <div class=\"note-detail\">差し戻しが届く場所を、送信した直後に示す</div>\n          </div>\n        </div>\n      </div>\n    </div>\n\n    <div class=\"foot\" data-type=\"note\">番号は修正の優先順で、画面上の位置とは関係しない。今回は優先順が上から順に並んだだけで、入れ替われば線は交差する。</div>\n  </div>\n</div>\n",
      "url": "https://design-vault.pages.dev/designs/callout-numbered-screen/pattern.html",
      "fonts": [
        "https://design-vault.pages.dev/designs/callout-numbered-screen/font.css",
        "https://design-vault.pages.dev/designs/callout-numbered-screen/font-0.woff2",
        "https://design-vault.pages.dev/designs/callout-numbered-screen/font-1.woff2",
        "https://design-vault.pages.dev/designs/callout-numbered-screen/font-2.woff2"
      ]
    }
  },
  "urls": {
    "ja": "https://design-vault.pages.dev/designs/callout-numbered-screen",
    "en": "https://design-vault.pages.dev/en/designs/callout-numbered-screen"
  },
  "notesMarkdown": "受入検査の指摘は、文章にすると読まれない。「勘定科目が先頭にある」と書いても、\n読み手はその画面を思い出せないからである。番号を画面に打つと、指摘は場所を\n持つようになり、直す人は探さずに済む。\n\n画面を線画にしているのは権利の話ではなく、読まれ方の話である。実物の文字を\n写した瞬間、聞き手は指摘ではなく文面を読み始め、会議は文言の推敲に移る。"
}